if i cried out loud
over sorrows i've known
and the secrets i've heard
it would ease my mind
someone sharing the load
but i wont breath a word
while the children laughed
i was always afraid
of the smile of the clown
so i close my eyes
till i cant see the light
and i hide from the sould
i can hear the cry
of the leaf on a tree
as it falls to the ground
i can hear the call
of an echoing voice
and there's no one around
we're two of a kind
silence and i
we need a chance to talk things over
two of a kind silence and i
we'll find way to work it out
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i can tell this came from inside..soulful..i can relate as i often just reflect myself.
Is this one of those “if these walls could talk” poems? That’s how I’m interpreting it. It’s all that you’ve seen, heard, experienced in life and how you’re unable to share your emotions.
I feel you meron. I really do.
Good work!
Finally a poem I can understand, good job Meron!!
Beautiful GiTem!
to add a spice to it
A colleague just reminded me that it is a friendship week. Eventhough, I dont know any of you in person, your civility & sophistication in this forum impressed me
so consider this as if it was sent from someone you know & care … Happy Friendship week to yaa all !!!
…… A Friend……
(A)ccepts you as you are
(B)elieves in “you”
(C)alls you just to say “HI”
(D)oesn’t give up ! ! on you
!!!
(E)nvisions the whole of you (even the unfinished parts)
(F)orgives your mistakes
(G)ives unconditionally
(H)elps you
(I)nvites you over
!!!
(J)ust “be” with you
(K)eeps you close at heart
(L)oves you for who you are
(M)akes a difference in your life
!!!
(N)ever Judges
(O)ffer support
(P)icks you up
(Q)uiets your fears
(R)aises your spirits
!!!
(S)ays nice things about you
(T)ells U the truth when you need to hear it
(U)nderstands you
(V)alues you
!!!
(W)alks beside you
(X)-plains thing you don’t understand
(Y)ells when you won’t listen and
(Z)aps you back to reality
-Have a mellow day!
MindWithOutConscious, Just wanna say, I really enjoy reading your comments. Happy friendship week to you too!
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Thanks Celebratelife, i feel the same!
Meron …I LIKE! Great poem…
my favorite section being:
while the children laughed
i was always afraid
of the smile of the clown
so i close my eyes
till i cant see the light
and i hide from the sould
I liked how you played with 2 different senses (at least in my mind’s interpretation…): the sound of laughter…stimulated ur fear of the ‘painted clown smile’- that amuses but is manufactured/mask-like…and so you chose blindness…which moved toward permanence. Hiding you from selling your soul…?
Merons
that … that was absolutely a great metaphor… I can visualize what you say…
Love it.!
beautiful!
this is very good meron, keep writing…